for pntbttr:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Westeros#Westerosi haven't looked at the gameplay yet. i'll save that for later.
overall nice work. This one will need a bit more work than the world of Tor map, that one is almost done. But it's actually farther along than the no name map.
unlike pntbttr, i think the bridges are fine. what exactly needs improvement pntbttr? He is right about the connection lines though.
colors and texture are fine except i don't like the purplish colors. too bright and saturated.
I'm not a fan of the background but it's not bad. I especially don't like the bottom right corner.
Also don't like the title. You probably would have improved it in the final version without me saying anything anyway. I think this map needs a very fancy title.
The mini map is too small and too cramped. What you can try is to move all the regions all the way to the right side of the map and put the mini map on the left side to the left of the brown region.
I don't see a problem with white rivers but the river between the frozen zone and the paps is not clear. Can those two attack? If it is supposed to be impassable there then the river needs to be a little longer otherwise make the river a little shorter so it's clear that they can attack.
The river above ramsgate is too narrow at one point.
There are river's all over the map that don't change game play. If your goal is to have a complicated map with adjacencies that are hard see then it's fine. But some players won't play on the map because of it. You can de-clutter the map by removing some of the rivers that don't change game play. I wouldn't remove them all though because the rivers give the map a unique feel. I do have a couple of suggestions for rivers to remove:
The extra fork of the river in seaguard is confusing, unnecessary, and doesn't make the look of the map better. It should be removed.
I think the river in Antler (in top green region) should be removed. it is too close to another river so it doesn't help the look of the map.
for pntbttr: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Westeros#Westeros
i haven't looked at the gameplay yet. i'll save that for later.
overall nice work. This one will need a bit more work than the world of Tor map, that one is almost done. But it's actually farther along than the no name map.
unlike pntbttr, i think the bridges are fine. what exactly needs improvement pntbttr? He is right about the connection lines though.
colors and texture are fine except i don't like the purplish colors. too bright and saturated.
I'm not a fan of the background but it's not bad. I especially don't like the bottom right corner.
Also don't like the title. You probably would have improved it in the final version without me saying anything anyway. I think this map needs a very fancy title.
The mini map is too small and too cramped. What you can try is to move all the regions all the way to the right side of the map and put the mini map on the left side to the left of the brown region.
I don't see a problem with white rivers but the river between the frozen zone and the paps is not clear. Can those two attack? If it is supposed to be impassable there then the river needs to be a little longer otherwise make the river a little shorter so it's clear that they can attack.
The river above ramsgate is too narrow at one point.
There are river's all over the map that don't change game play. If your goal is to have a complicated map with adjacencies that are hard see then it's fine. But some players won't play on the map because of it. You can de-clutter the map by removing some of the rivers that don't change game play. I wouldn't remove them all though because the rivers give the map a unique feel. I do have a couple of suggestions for rivers to remove:
The extra fork of the river in seaguard is confusing, unnecessary, and doesn't make the look of the map better. It should be removed.
I think the river in Antler (in top green region) should be removed. it is too close to another river so it doesn't help the look of the map.