,,... okay, i am [was] waiting for people to join this beta game and am looking fresh at that and this beta map^ , and decided i would offer a final refinement of the critique:
the new greenland does sort of show better as on piece but sacrifices having the more 2 toned light & shadowing of the rest , ... which seems important to the scheme.. so i got concerned about over complicating this edit and rethought to pinpoint whats most key:
*mainly the issue is more in the upside down south region 2 greenland.
*mainly the connectedness feeling has to be between the isle where the circle is and the center isle where the type is
* in both versions , the 4 greenland borders beside NW territory works, and also quebec and ontario,, but of course, those borders arent what i think caused the eye trick , i think one looks at the circle, and the type being off to the side can get associated with another territory. So moving the circle helped alot. == and so i am concluding the final most key edit is the most simple: a slight move of the type towards the circle , putting the first and last letter standing out nicely in the water on either side of the center isle ,it would feel more part of the circle.
* as far as tone or shading changes go the main thing is that those 3 sections of the territory match (and pop out. They could be a warmer tone ,,,, could be 2 toned as you wish,,,, but would need to match ideally, perhaps via a stripe of light or shadow being more distinct in the 3 pieces? )
.. in conclusion, focus more on how it looks in region 2 , and the type move might be more key, and trust your eye with any tone pop of the 3 sections [isles] of the territory.
[[PS. i swear eastern and western US alberta and alaska seem warmer ]]
,,... okay, i am [was] waiting for people to join this beta game and am looking fresh at that and this beta map^ , and decided i would offer a final refinement of the critique:
the new greenland does sort of show better as on piece but sacrifices having the more 2 toned light & shadowing of the rest , ... which seems important to the scheme.. so i got concerned about over complicating this edit and rethought to pinpoint whats most key:
*mainly the issue is more in the upside down south region 2 greenland.
*mainly the connectedness feeling has to be between the isle where the circle is and the center isle where the type is
* in both versions , the 4 greenland borders beside NW territory works, and also quebec and ontario,, but of course, those borders arent what i think caused the eye trick , i think one looks at the circle, and the type being off to the side can get associated with another territory. So moving the circle helped alot. == and so i am concluding the final most key edit is the most simple: a slight move of the type towards the circle , putting the first and last letter standing out nicely in the water on either side of the center isle ,it would feel more part of the circle.
* as far as tone or shading changes go the main thing is that those 3 sections of the territory match (and pop out. They could be a warmer tone ,,,, could be 2 toned as you wish,,,, but would need to match ideally, perhaps via a stripe of light or shadow being more distinct in the 3 pieces? )
.. in conclusion, focus more on how it looks in region 2 , and the type move might be more key, and trust your eye with any tone pop of the 3 sections [isles] of the territory.
[[PS. i swear eastern and western US alberta and alaska seem warmer ]]