names are too small, can't read them. need a larger font size and a black outline. Try Pntbttr's method for making the outline. If you can't get it right then ask him for help.
background is much much better but a shade too dark and too saturated. use the adjust hue/saturation tool from the menu to de-saturate it a little.
Lines look smoother. good job.
The title is no good. The font and size are good, but the white outline is too much/too big and the background for the title doesn't match the map at all.
Sorry for my 'rough' manner of telling you this but i don't have time for flowery language.
names are too small, can't read them. need a larger font size and a black outline. Try Pntbttr's method for making the outline. If you can't get it right then ask him for help.
background is much much better but a shade too dark and too saturated. use the adjust hue/saturation tool from the menu to de-saturate it a little.
Lines look smoother. good job.
The title is no good. The font and size are good, but the white outline is too much/too big and the background for the title doesn't match the map at all.
Sorry for my 'rough' manner of telling you this but i don't have time for flowery language.