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Post #121
Yes please make all the borders clear. I have to check them with the lens!
Also I have not a clear idea why you put the ring divider there. It seem to me the weirdest location. If you make Saturn South and Eastern Ring to touch each other it will provide a good internal connectivity inside the 'Ringed Planets' region. Personally I'm not a fan of disconnected regions.
Names don't need to perfectly fit inside the territory. Circles possibly yes. For example Jupiter Minor and Cronus are okay even if they partially cover the outline. Your eye is able to understand the line path even where it is hidden by the text. In some places they seem to be forced in a non-natural position, (Ouranos)
In the whole site Western and Eastern are shorten as W. and E. where the place is little. Since I cannot see the problem to call them 'W. Rings' and 'E. Rings'. It seems more logical to me.
For the Belt I personally liked this version http://www.the-inkstore.co.uk/frame/Sol%20Rev%205a.png but without the red coloring on the right of the Moon. (Let fall the white frame option) I don't know what Fendi thinks about it being to much real... but in my opinion it looked definitely better than as the current one is.
I would like to see a bit more the Sun surface and a bit less the luminescence.
I think there are many little things you can do to finalize it better rather than ask to Fendi to make the work.
Don't be impatient!
Also I have not a clear idea why you put the ring divider there. It seem to me the weirdest location. If you make Saturn South and Eastern Ring to touch each other it will provide a good internal connectivity inside the 'Ringed Planets' region. Personally I'm not a fan of disconnected regions.
Names don't need to perfectly fit inside the territory. Circles possibly yes. For example Jupiter Minor and Cronus are okay even if they partially cover the outline. Your eye is able to understand the line path even where it is hidden by the text. In some places they seem to be forced in a non-natural position, (Ouranos)
In the whole site Western and Eastern are shorten as W. and E. where the place is little. Since I cannot see the problem to call them 'W. Rings' and 'E. Rings'. It seems more logical to me.
For the Belt I personally liked this version http://www.the-inkstore.co.uk/frame/Sol%20Rev%205a.png but without the red coloring on the right of the Moon. (Let fall the white frame option) I don't know what Fendi thinks about it being to much real... but in my opinion it looked definitely better than as the current one is.
I would like to see a bit more the Sun surface and a bit less the luminescence.
I think there are many little things you can do to finalize it better rather than ask to Fendi to make the work.
Don't be impatient!
«God doesn't play dice with the World» ~ Albert Einstein