I am not sure this map is salvageable as it is currently designed. The changes that have been made make the colors and textures more vivid, yet, the map remains complicated. To further this complication, you have added more text and italicized it.
My biggest complaint about this map is the lines. It is a strange contrast to have long, straight, and solid lines on the exterior of countries, and short, messy, and sharp changing lines to separate each of the territories. The new version seems to exacerbate this problem of design.
I think another issue is the number of territories proportionate to the actual land mass that you have designed. The map is very condensed in areas, so expanding the text makes this worse.
In other words, the things you've chosen to update on this map are not addressing its biggest problems--that is, that it is painful to look at design wise. Granted, this map is much easier to look over than the Europe map is in terms of proportion changes across countries, but it is still a difficult one to follow.
Thanks for investing time in making this map better.
I am not sure this map is salvageable as it is currently designed. The changes that have been made make the colors and textures more vivid, yet, the map remains complicated. To further this complication, you have added more text and italicized it.
My biggest complaint about this map is the lines. It is a strange contrast to have long, straight, and solid lines on the exterior of countries, and short, messy, and sharp changing lines to separate each of the territories. The new version seems to exacerbate this problem of design.
I think another issue is the number of territories proportionate to the actual land mass that you have designed. The map is very condensed in areas, so expanding the text makes this worse.
In other words, the things you've chosen to update on this map are not addressing its biggest problems--that is, that it is painful to look at design wise. Granted, this map is much easier to look over than the Europe map is in terms of proportion changes across countries, but it is still a difficult one to follow.
Thanks for investing time in making this map better.