Southern New England, Hudson Valley, Long Island.
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The_Bishop wrote:
I could rephrase that sentence as follows:
"Striped areas will grant you a bonus only if held together with one or both adjacent regions of the same colors."
Maybe this would sound simpler and clearer.
«God doesn't play dice with the World» ~ Albert Einstein
«War is God’s way of teaching us geography» ~ Mark Twain
The_Bishop wrote:
Changed the title and removed some useless text

New Title (click to show)
«God doesn't play dice with the World» ~ Albert Einstein
«War is God’s way of teaching us geography» ~ Mark Twain
Dima wrote:
Imo the new writing looks much much better than the previous!

I woud play around with the white lines and look how it looks if you replace it with white dots. In this case dots could look a bit better.

Maybe the upper title could be a slightly smaller, due to dimensions: you made the boston and NY writings smaller and now maybe this headline must become smaller a bit to remain proportional.
"vorple: the real strategy comes when you cant just win cuz you got lucky and got the big card stack"
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The_Bishop wrote:
There are still many things to fix, but I wanted to show the new title in first place.

Thanks @Dima for your comment and suggestions. The upper title is the correct geographic definition of this map, "Boston" and "New York City" are just two territory labels that serve as title to make it simpler. Yes, perhaps the upper title a bit smaller may look better. I'm not a huge fan of the dotted lines, I rather like well-visible dashed lines, I'll try to change them anyway.

I could have sent you the images Dima, but for now I'm trying to finish it by myself,.. You have already too many maps in developement!
«God doesn't play dice with the World» ~ Albert Einstein
«War is God’s way of teaching us geography» ~ Mark Twain